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When I am lonely, these words I hear
They whisper to me, please don't fear
You are not alone, I'm always here

They echo loudly, in this quiet room
Dancing along, with a furtive tune
Secretly hoping, they will come true soon

As I look about, to see from where they came
Seeing not a thing, I feel nothing but shame
Is this someone, trying to play a sick game

Seeing something fall, and smashing onto the floor
The wind picking up, blowing open the door  
Hearing it again, coming from beyond the door

Seeing a spirit, waiting patiently in my yard
Giving me a chance, with an enchanting trump card
Please take me with you, being lonely is just too hard

Coming up to me slowly, and looking me in the eye
Whispering quietly, are you sure you want to die
Trying hard not to cry, I tell this lonely world good bye
:iconshinigaminightwalker:

Author's Comments

this is another version of my poem 'Always here-extended version' [link]
i changed some things here and there and i added another stanza. i wanted this one to go in another direction than the other version.
i did this one in the same structure as the other one. the syllables in the stanza go (9,8,9) (10,9,10) (11,10,11)(12,11,12)(13,12,13)(14,13,14) and the last word in each line of a stanza rhymes.

anyways, i hope that you like it ^Y^

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:icon9nine-lives:
thats deep :-O

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98% of teens would be dead if Twilight said breathing wasn't cool. Post this if you are apart of the 2% laughing.

EVERY Hetalia fan should watch this [link]
:iconchibibookworm221:
ya nii deep LOL. ahem sorry. i like it shunshun.great as always. good job.

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"Silence is the ultimate weapon of power; it is also one of the hardest arguments to dispute."
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"got a taste for religion? lick a monk." :lick:
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check out ma :gallery: :D [link] peaz and tank ooz ^w^
:iconshinigaminightwalker:
:D i have my moments.

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~=l< )

I'm not a social butterfly. I'm a solitary moth
--
Me: I have a tea bag on my nose
Gin: I got a tousen on my toes
Me: Gin's not in my hair
Gin: I'm in your underwear
Me: ..wait. you are? where?
Gin: :pointandlaugh: made you look
:iconshinigaminightwalker:
dont even get me started on 'nii deep':horny: :lmao:
thanks tenchan.im glad you like it :dummy:

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~=l< )

I'm not a social butterfly. I'm a solitary moth
--
Me: I have a tea bag on my nose
Gin: I got a tousen on my toes
Me: Gin's not in my hair
Gin: I'm in your underwear
Me: ..wait. you are? where?
Gin: :pointandlaugh: made you look
:iconchibibookworm221:
lol no no im not gonna go there lol. your welcome shunshun.

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"Silence is the ultimate weapon of power; it is also one of the hardest arguments to dispute."
--------
"got a taste for religion? lick a monk." :lick:
--------
check out ma :gallery: :D [link] peaz and tank ooz ^w^
:iconshinigaminightwalker:
:slow:

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~=l< )

I'm not a social butterfly. I'm a solitary moth
--
Me: I have a tea bag on my nose
Gin: I got a tousen on my toes
Me: Gin's not in my hair
Gin: I'm in your underwear
Me: ..wait. you are? where?
Gin: :pointandlaugh: made you look
:icon9nine-lives:
yup i know so do i

--
98% of teens would be dead if Twilight said breathing wasn't cool. Post this if you are apart of the 2% laughing.

EVERY Hetalia fan should watch this [link]
:iconfireyangel91:
i like this one too
:iconshinigaminightwalker:
:w00t: tanky tanky ^^

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~=l< )

I'm not a social butterfly. I'm a solitary moth
--
Me: I have a tea bag on my nose
Gin: I got a tousen on my toes
Me: Gin's not in my hair
Gin: I'm in your underwear
Me: ..wait. you are? where?
Gin: :pointandlaugh: made you look

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